"Lola,Lola get up!!" I hear my sister trying to wake me up. My eyes slowly open as I see my sister Zorah. Our mom ,Dad and our younger brother are not awake yet. I slowly awake I feel quite groggy I was up all night packing. We went down stairs and my sister and I made breakfast. I poured the milk into my cereal bowl and then I heard a thump. My brother Cornelius came down stairs. He froze.I knew what he was thinking.Why are you up so early? Before he could speak
"We are going on a trip today. We are going to New york!"He looked at me blankly and then came our parents we said our good byes and we were on our way. We got in our hot pink magical Bentley and flew off to Manhattan. Before I knew it we were flying. I sat there my eyes watering , I choked back the tears(I'm not a crier).
When we got to are apartment Zorah and I made dinner, I was way out of it I'm a little tired from our trip. Before I knew it I had spilled the hot water all over so we had to start over:(. We had Top Ramen, salad and cookies our mom made us. Zorah put the food on the table and said "Bon Appetit!"
Cool Post! Does your car also serve as a time travel machine? See you in Ancient Egypt Lola!
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Hey sis, nice use of the delicious words and (shhh)the writers secret. Great description and humor! See you in the time travel machine.
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I like how you tolled us about your morning and how you were groggy in the morning.
ReplyDeleteI love the way how you said I was slowly awake and you felt quite groggy.
ReplyDeleteWow, I REALLY like your story! I really like the part when Cornelius froze I could see a little picture of him freezing in my mind, I also really liked how you layed out the story, it was very interesting.
ReplyDeleteHey love your post I hope you are safe on your way to New york love ya. isis
ReplyDeleteIt is always exciting to begin a story with an energetic quote. Well done.
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